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You're lost at sea in misery
You only live twice peacefully
Crepuscular cyst drains you out
Fever in a wine bottle
But don't you see that it's only me
That confuses the downs blissfully
You're lost in space with the human race
And you're blanking out in the wrong place

This hypothetical abyss is making you feel ill
Skeptics pass by against their will
They've justified their pessimistic selves
And your wit is as wet as the marsh
But can't you see that it's only me
That's been driven by complacency
These sadists torn up our liberty
We fought back inadvertently

I channeled the signals
But we only heard static
Close by without a sound
Where have you been?
A song I wrote out of boredom, basically.
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otohime0394 Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're very good at poetry :D I like this alot!
plus, and i dont know why, but i love it when people use crepuscular :giggle:
it's SUCH an awesome word!

nice work ^^ ~
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Johnny-Ether Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2011  Student Artist
Thanks. :P
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otohime0394 Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
you're welcome :glomp:
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Maxl654 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010
This song reminds me... something I know.
Great!
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Johnny-Ether Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010  Student Artist
You don't say... =P
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Maxl654 Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010
Yep, I said I won't give my MSN. Sorry...
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Johnny-Ether Featured By Owner Dec 26, 2010  Student Artist
Oh, that's alright then. I was only going to add you on Windows Live.
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